Christy - Honestly, I dont know what to say this is a VERY VERY VERY VERY VERY VERY VERY good first draft lol. You did a great job in summarizing the main events as well as giving a bit of background info about Ivy and her beliefs. So yea good job idk how you can make it better :P.
Susan - Pretty solid post! Detailed summary, smooth intro, and very appealing message in the end. Good Job!
Aakash - Good rough draft I really liked how you explained the purpose for which the author wrote the book and what the book started off as. Good Job!
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